Josh was ready he sat down on the chair lets go said Bobbie Joe started the shaver. it was going for 2 Min's done said Bobbie Joe the crowd were cheering for josh like a rugby game seven people were so brave they gave up there hair for cancer The people all looked like head jogs it was bad hair day as well the weirds hair was Adele she had a real plate with real icing.
by Jed
Good job for publishing for writing Jed. I like the sentence about people cheering like a rugby game. Challenge: reread what you have written and add some full stops and capital letters, I can see at least 6 full stops you need to add.
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